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Lorna's full article in New Left Review can be read here ( which I just saw) : https://www.jewishvoiceforlabour.org.uk/article/is-starmer-the-lesser-of-two-evils/

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Dear TLL Readers

Yesterday I asked a good mate of mine (a straight shooter whose views I respect and will call X) what he thought of the latest TLL:

https://theleftlane2024.substack.com/p/cant-we-do-better-than-lesser-evilism

This is X’s response:

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I scanned the words briefly, but there is a lot of GRAPHIC noise which DISTRACTS from the text....!

Visually I found it problematic to read. It is quite easy to fix, just go simple. Don't press caps, italics, underscore etc.

Also, I wouldn't put in links, also distracting. When I have done these things, huge amount of research nobody ever clicked on then, so ration them to two or three.

Make the illustrations smaller, and keep the headlines the same size. It was difficult to tell if it was another article or not.

All these things make a difference to whether people read it or not. It could have done with being a bit shorter perhaps to avoid TLDNR syndrome.

The writing was on point though as normal!

X

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I replied:

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Thanks X. A lot to think over. I definitely do not want https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Too_long;_didn%27t_read ) !

So you think THE FORMAT should be more like this, right?

https://mondoweiss.net/2024/06/what-comes-after-gantzs-resignation/

[ 1400 words and no graphic distractions ]

Cheers

Alan

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So, dear readers, your views most appreciated below.

Alan

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